Our group project is called student life, we decided to use Donald Glover and different music artists to describe what people like to listen too in college. our frontage, is different and i enjoyed making the cover page, although our group should of chipped in more to help with ideas.
on our feedback sheet the comments we got were; ''the images could have been bigger to fill the page'', ''the colors could be more enthusiastic'', ''Well done for using the big capital, have you thought of more writing?'', ''font use is good!'', ''color scheme is nice'', ''Not much of a dominant image, basic fonts'',''I like the glowing colors'', ''the frames are pretty good around the photos''. i have considered peoples comments and changed the fonts around on the magazine.


Thank you for including the magazine feedback! This should help you for your final product - making your own magazine, to consider your peers feedback.
ReplyDeleteGood start you have considered the essential codes and conventions for a front cover and dps. Next time, consider using one image for your dominant image on your front cover and overlap with the masthead to signify the brand status of the magazine, and artist on the page. You started a dps, and applied a drop cap and kicker, which was a pleasing start alongside your article title.